March 31, 2010Poetry Corner 6 Comments Good Weather I find the sunshine An incredibly sexy Reason to wake up. Rate this:Share this:FacebookXLike Loading... Related
You’re missing a syllable in the second line. Might I suggest adding an “an”?
Thanks! Fixed!
I love this one!
This lovely haiku
absolutely made my day
if slightly delayed.
🙂
awww, thanks! It kind of cracks me up! 🙂
oh, and I LOVE your haiku response, too. hahaha!